I have never read an english poem before and I really love it! For me it sounds so much better in english and I really like the plot of it. Very sad but also true- it's so cruel....
Really good, keep it up :)
What if...we'd still love each other? What if... we would leave each other? What if... We'd marry each other and become an old couple, that sits on the sofa watch TV and doesen't talk anymore? Your stuff provokes a lot of questions, like always, and that's great. (Please write back in german, my english is beschissen, as you see!) Liebe Grüße, Patrick