Leserkommentare zu:
„By the Sea“ von LyraLyra Gabriel
Lese By the Sea - oder zeige den Autorensteckbrief von LyraLyra Gabriel.
Gedichte von unseren Autoren in der Kategorie „Lyrik“
Rolph David (ronan.david
web.de)
24.08.2024
Hello LyraLyra,
Synaesthesia comes into its own in your poem. You can literally hear the lapping of the waves against the bow of the boat and the flapping wings of the flock of birds. Sight is also addressed in the azure blue sky, in the gold-emblazoned wings - different sensory impressions blend here into a single perception. Very beautiful! Thank you for your lines.
Synaesthesia comes into its own in your poem. You can literally hear the lapping of the waves against the bow of the boat and the flapping wings of the flock of birds. Sight is also addressed in the azure blue sky, in the gold-emblazoned wings - different sensory impressions blend here into a single perception. Very beautiful! Thank you for your lines.
Antwort von LyraLyra Gabriel (24.08.2024):
Thank you very much, I am honourd.
LyraLyra
LyraLyra Gabriel
24.08.2024
Thank you very much, I am honourd.
Die Rechte und die Verantwortlichkeit für die Leserkommentare liegen bei den jeweiligen Einsendern.
Die Betreiber von e-Stories.org übernehmen keine Haftung für die Beiträge oder von den Einsendern verlinkte Inhalte.
Infos zum Urheberrecht / Haftungsausschluss (Disclaimer).